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#part3 ADVANCED GRAMMAR STRUCTURES FOR WRITING TASK 2

🟢Simple: In the past, children used to interact with their parents by strolling together, and they now spend most of their time playing casual video games. 🟢Advanced: Gone are the days when children interacted with their parents by strolling together; today, they spend most of their time playing casual video games.

🟣Simple: Engaging in athletic activities has become a common routine for most individuals, which might lead to improved physical well-being. 🟣Advanced: Engaging in athletic activities has become a common routine for most individuals, a practice that has been associated with improved physical well-being.

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✅ ADVANTAGES OF INCREASING THE COST OF FUEL TO MITIGATE ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS

Proponents of an increase in fuel cost cite reduced environmental issues as the main upside. When governmental bodies start surging the cost of fuel, individuals are discouraged from driving their private vehicles for different purposes such as commuting to work, thereby forcing them to embrace public transportation methods like buses and trams. Such discouragement is likely to mitigate the effect of greenhouse gases released into the atmosphere by private cars, while simultaneously promoting long-term environmental sustainability. In a world where gas emissions produced by these transports are eroding biodiversity and humanity alike, escalating fuel prices is paramount when it comes to addressing ecological problems. @asrorsielts

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✅ ADVANTAGES OF USING INTERNET FOR GETTING MEDICAL ADVICE

Making use of the internet for medical purposes has a number of positive aspects, not the least of which is that it promotes efficient time-management. Unlike traditional clinics, which often force people to wait for long hours, the internet allows them to obtain invaluable information about different health conditions and get medical guidance quickly and from the comfort of their homes, thereby freeing up substantial amounts of time and energy that could be reallocated to other meaningful and essential activities such as spending quality time with family members, completing office projects and juggling household chores. This, by extension, results in healthier family ties, while simultaneously enabling them to climb the career ladder step by step. This time-saving nature of the internet is particularly valuable for working parents, who spread themselves too thin while securing a job and taking time to nurture their children’s moral development, thus struggling to visit conventional clinics. @asrorsielts

#part2 ADVANCED GRAMMAR STRUCTURES FOR WRITING TASK 2

⭐️ Advanced: Watching TV shows excessively not only damages children's physical health but also affects their academic performance adversely. ⭐️ More advanced: Watching TV shows excessively damages children's physical health, while simultaneously affecting their academic performance adversely.

⚡️Simple: Most students spend long hours grasping complex concepts. However, this intensive cognitive effort does not always lead to academic success. ⚡️Advanced: Most students spend long hours grasping complex concepts; however, this intensive cognitive effort does not always lead to academic success.

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The pie charts show the distribution of household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in 2010. Overall, while unspecified category accounted for the largest share of household spending in Japan, housing was the dominant expenditure in Malaysia. Another notable point is that the smallest proportion was channeled towards healthcare in both nations. In Japan, ‘other’ services and goods and especially food emerged as the dominant expenditures, accounting for 53% of total spending. The figure for food was comparatively higher than what was observed with transport, whose percentage stood at 20%. What is noteworthy to mention is that housing and healthcare marked a 15% gap (21% and 6%, respectively). Notwithstanding these patterns, there were considerable variations in household expenses in Malaysia. Housing was the front-runner (34%), followed by food and ‘other’ category, with respective figures being 27% and 26%. Healthcare stood out by demonstrating the smallest proportion in the entire dataset (3%), a figure that was 7% lower than that of transport. ✅ 160 words @asrorsielts

ADVANCED GRAMMAR STRUCTURES FOR WRITING TASK 2

✅ Simple: Social media is a double-edged sword because it connects people globally and reduces face-to-face interaction. ✅ Advanced: Social media is a double-edged sword in that it connects people globally and reduces face-to-face interaction

🔥 Simple: Many countries are now investing heavily in renewable energy source to combat climate change. 🔥 Advanced: Many countries are now investing heavily in renewable energy source in a bid to combat climate change.

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#paragraph #task1 In 2008, coal and oil emerged as the primary energy sources, accounting for over 70% of total energy use combined. The figure for oil was comparatively higher than what was observed with gas, whose percentage stood at 22.9%. While solar and ‘other’ marked a 2.5% gap (1.3% and 3.8%, respectively), only a small fraction of energy utilized was derived from wind (0.3%). @asrorsielts

The table gives information about how much milk was produced annually in four countries between 1990 and 2010. Overall, the Netherlands remained the dominant milk producer, while quite the opposite was true for Guatemala. The Netherlands, Guatemala, and Tanzania showed general upward trends, whereas Australia followed a marked downward pattern toward the end of the period. In 1990, the difference between the Netherlands and Australia in terms of milk production was negligible, with respective figures of 11,262,000 and 11,246,000 litres. Given the opposing trajectories they followed, the gap between them had widened by 2010, with Netherlands accounting for 11,466,000 litres of milk produced. The amount of milk manufactured in Australia, however, fell to 9,165,000 by the end. As for Tanzania, its figure stood at 87,000 at the outset, an amount that surged to 155,000 by 2010. Guatemala produced 26,000 litres of milk in 1990, growing minimally to 55,000 in 2000 and hitting an all-time high in the final year, at 84,000. ✅ 161 words @asrorsielts

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