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The line graph illustrates changes in the worldwide demand, measured in million tones (mt), for polyester, cotton, cellulosic, and wood between 1980 and 2015 Overall, the use of all four textile fibers increased over the period, except for wool, which after a period of increase and declined, reverted back to its initial level. Additionally, the figure for the polyester showed the most profound increase. In 1980, cotton was the most used fiber of the four, with the demand for it standing at around 14mt, more than double the figure for any its competitors in the market. Following 35 years, both rose significantly, with the demand for polyester reaching a chart high of close to 70mt, while the figure for the former ended the period at just above 30mt. In contrast, the other two –cellulosic and wool, saw rather flat trends in demand. They started the period in question at approximately 2.5mt each, and held steady at this level until 2000, when the figure for cellulosic began to increase, registering more than a two-fold growth to little less than 10mt. However, the demand for wool declined, falling to next to none, thus widening the gap between the two in 2015. 199-word count

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—detailed body 2 In contrast, the other two –cellulosic and wool, saw rather flat trends in demand. They started the period in question at approximately 2.5mt each, and held steady at this level until 2000, when the figure for cellulosic began to increase, registering more than a two-fold growth to little less than 10mt. however, the demand for declined, falling to next to none, thus widening the gap between the two in 2015.

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detailed body 1 In 1980, cotton was the most used fiber of the four, with the demand for it standing at around 14mt, more than double the figure for any its competitors in the market. –effectively summarizes and compares. Following 35 years, both rose significantly, with the demand for polyester reaching a chart high of close to 70mt, while the figure for the former ended the period at just above 31mt.

Overall, the use of all four textile fibers increased over the period, except for wool, which after a period of increase and declined, reverted back to its initial level. Additionally, the figure for the polyester showed the most profound increase.

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The line graph illustrates changes in the worldwide demand, measured in million tones (mt), for polyester, cotton, cellulosic, and wood between 1980 and 2015. including data from the chart .

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—summarize and compare —-this is the requirement.

there was an increase, the number increased

increase —verb and noun,

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