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The line graph illustrates changes in the shares of elderly people spending time on five different leisure time activities over a 30-year period.
In 1980, the percentage of elderly individuals in the US who spent time on watching TV was the highest, accounting for 60%, and that had increased by around 5 percentage points by 2010. The figures for reading and surfing the internet also experienced increases, with their starting figures staying at 30% and a mere 5%, respectively, showing a wide gap between the two activities. Following 20 years, however, the figures closed the disparity before registering a rather similar increasing trend. By 2010, the former had reached 60%, being 10% higher than the latter.
The shares of the elderly who spent their time on theatre, meanwhile, saw a decline. Ranked second with 50% at the beginning of the period, the figure for theatre decreased notably, falling to 30%, after which it staged a recovery to around 45% in 2010. In contrast, the largest increase was seen in the percentage of elderly people spending time hiking. 20% of the elderly went hiking in 1980 but saw nothing short of an exponential rise, reaching a chart high of 80% in the final year.
Overall, all the activities saw an increasing trend in the proportion of elderly, except for theatre, which witnessed a general dip, albeit with a recovery in the second half of the period. It is also clear that the increase was the most pronounced in hiking, exceeding the other activities in terms of the percentage of the elderly.
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REINSTATE - to give someone back their previous job or position, or to cause something to exist again:
A month after being unfairly dismissed, he was reinstated in his job. The Supreme Court reinstated the death penalty in 1976.
People these days tend to move to cities in order to reside, as these places provide easy access to education and healthcare facilities. However, in my opinion, this sudden move is likely to bring a host of problems in urban areas.
One main reason for migration to cities stems from better education in such places. Cities are hubs for the majority of educational settings, which tends to attract citizens from rural areas, as it is usually difficult to gain higher educational knowledge in rural places due to a lack of educational centers, contributing to rural-to-urban migration.
Healthcare is another major contributor to this trend. These days, people are putting extra attention to their health conditions because of rising medical costs and outbreaks of new kinds of lethal and chronic diseases. As cities have great hospitals filled with skilled doctors, people might move to urban places so that they have immediate access to healthcare, mitigating the risk of being subject to such illnesses.
However, as population increases in cities, this will pose several issues. The first difficulty is overcrowding. It is logical to argue that if an influx of people from the countryside moves to cities, the likelihood of overcrowding is the case, perhaps leading to a shortage of housing, food, and other resources. These problems may, in turn, make living in cities challenging to a great extent.
What is more, rural-to-urban migration might put a strain on infrastructure, including water supply and waste management, as migrated people need these provisions on a daily basis, and they produce waste from their consumptions, putting an extra burden on the infrastructure. This is likely to lead to poor living conditions if not managed effectively.
In summary, it is true that an increasing number of people are choosing to live in cities due to several reasons. Nonetheless, I believe that this rural-to-urban migration might cause problems such as overpopulation and an overuse of resources.
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Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas. Why is this? What problems does this cause?
OFF-PUTTING - slightly unpleasant or worrying so that you do not want to get involved in any way:
He's slightly aggressive, which a lot of people find a bit off-putting when they first meet him. What I found off-putting was the amount of work that you were expected to do.
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The bar graph compares the shares of men and women teachers in the UK in 2010. The information is broken down into six different educational settings.
The biggest disparity was seen in nursery/pre-schools and primary schools, with a ratio of around 90% to 10%, with the figures for female teachers being significantly higher than that of males in each setting. In secondary schools, the percentage of female instructors was higher compared to males, with respective figures accounting for approximately 55% and 45% in 2010.
In contrast, private training institutes and universities had more men teachers. In the former setting, men made up around 55%, 10 percentage points higher than that of women. About 70% of men constituted university teachers, more than double the figure for women, at 30%. Interestingly, the proportion of men and women teachers at college was similar, at 50% apiece.
Overall, while the percentage of female teachers was significantly higher in nursery/pre-schools, and elementary schools, universities and private training institutes hired more male teachers in 2010.
The bar graph compares the shares of men and women teachers in the UK in 2010. The information is broken down into six different educational settings.
The biggest disparity was seen in nursery/pre-schools and primary schools, with a ratio of around 90% to 10%, with the figures for female teachers being significantly higher than that of males in each setting. In secondary schools, the percentage of female instructors was higher compared to males, with respective figures accounting for approximately 55% and 45% in 2010.
In contrast, private training institutes and universities had more men teachers. In the former setting, men made up around 55%, 10 percentage points higher than that of women. About 70% of men constituted university teachers, more than double the figure for women, at 30%. Interestingly, the proportion of men and women teachers at college was similar, at 50% apiece.
Overall, while the percentage of female teachers was significantly higher in nursery/pre-schools, and elementary schools, universities and private training institutes hired more male teachers in 2010.
