IELTS Essays Band 9 | IELTS Writing 9.0

🔖 California Gold Rush Story There's a California gold rush story that tells of two brothers who sold all they had and went prospecting for gold. They discovered a vein of the shining ore, staked a claim, and proceeded to get down to the serious business of getting the gold ore of the mine. All went well at first, but then a strange thing happened. The vein of gold disappeared! They had come to the end of the rainbow, and the pot of gold was no longer there. The brothers continued to pick away, but without success. Finally, they gave up in disgust. #motivation #ReadingTime #Short_stories ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

So you want to score a band 8 on IELTS Writing? Many IELTS test-takers spend a lot of time training to write top-notch essays. To achieve a desired score, they stuff their essays with uncommon vocabulary, overuse complicated grammar or write too many words. But are these means really necessary? The answer is NO. There are a lot of much simpler writings that score 8.0 and higher! This is because you don’t need any special knowledge: the examiner will assess your writing, not your thoughts. Even simple but accurately expressed ideas score better than too complicated ones. To succeed in IELTS Writing, you need to - be accurate - write simple things well Ridiculously, even well trained candidates often lose points on IELTS Writing because of making simple mistakes: from going off topic to writing too many words. We’ve gathered top 10 IELTS Writing tips that will help you score band 8+ on IELTS Writing: 🔢. Read the question Understanding what the question asks you to do is crucial for achieving a good score. That's why, always read your question thoroughly and cover all the points you're asked to write about. 🔢. Read what you have written Go back and read the paragraph you have just written before you start the next one. You may think that this is a waste of time. If so, you’d be wrong. It’s important to link your paragraphs together – what easier way to do that than just read what you have written? 🔢. Be clear The practical advice here is to select your best idea and write about that. That means not writing everything you know – leave some ideas out. Don’t worry if it is not your best explanation, worry about whether it is your clearest explanation. Let's collect 100 🔥 to be continued #IELTSToptips #writing9 ✅@Essays_band9 - Road to band 9️⃣

🔔 Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay295 💎 wildlife: animals, birds, insects, etc. that are wild and live in a natural environment. 🏷 Example: Development of the area would endanger wildlife. 💎 on the verge of extinction: a very few is left of that species 🏷 Example: Today, many animals are on the verge of extinction. 💎 exaggeration: a statement or description that makes something seem larger, better, worse or more important than it really is; the act of making a statement like this 🏷 Example: There was a degree of exaggeration in his description of events. 💎 To devote smth to smth: to give an amount of time, attention, etc. to 🏷 Example: I could only devote two hours a day to the work. 💎 To expend smth: to use or spend a lot of time, money, energy, 🏷 Example: She expended all her efforts on the care of home and children. #IELTSWriting #Writing9 #Vocabulary ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

Endi siz ham ingliz tilida ravon gapira olasiz Lingvist’s Data Scientist tadqiqotlariga ko‘ra, ingliz tilida eng kerakli 2000 ta so‘zni yod olsangiz, siz bu tilda erkin gapira olasiz! Men Gulora Muzaffarova, IELTS 8.5 sohibasi, Ingliz tilidan dars berish bo‘yicha 10 yillik tajribaga ega hamda 3000'dan ziyod o‘quvchilar ustozi bo‘laman. O‘quvchilarimning ingliz tilida gapirish jarayonidagi eng og‘riqli muammolardan biri bu – Nima deyishni bilmaslik, yaʼni so‘z boyligining kamligi. Tajribamdan kelib chiqib, ushbu muammoga yechim berishni maqsad qildim, shuning uchun: 🎚 Eng kerakli va ko‘p ishlatiladigan 2000 ta so‘zlarni fayl shaklida; 🎚 Samarali so’z yodlashning 6 ta usuli haqidagi 50 daqiqalik videodarslikdan foydalanib, yechim topishingiz uchun Telegram kanalimga yuklandi. Speaking darajangizni oshirish uchun kanalga kiring: @GuloraMuzaffarova

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🔔 Ideas about "Family" ➡️ Divorce 🏷 In the past, divorce was unacceptable. 🏷 It was considered to be embarrassing for a family. 🏷 People stayed together for religious or family reasons. 🏷 Divorce is more socially acceptable nowadays. 🏷 It has become much more common. 🏷 Divorce can be extremely stressful. 🏷 Lone parents may face financial difficulties. 🏷 Many single parents have to rely on benefits paid by the state. 🏷 Divorce can have a negative effect on children. 🏷 Children from single-parent families are more likely to get lower grades or drop out of school. 🏷 The rise in divorce rates may be connected to some social problems. ➡️ Care for Old People 🏷 Caring for elderly people was traditionally the responsibility of families. 🏷 Adults had to look after their elderly parents. 🏷 A woman’s job was to stay at home taking care of her family. 🏷 Nowadays, fewer elderly people are looked after by their relatives. 🏷 Residential homes provide care for large numbers of elderly people. 🏷 Some families are unable to look after elderly relatives. 🏷 Families tend to be smaller these days, and women often have full-time jobs. 🏷 Care homes provide a professional service for senior citizens. 🏷 Nurses are better trained than family members. ➡️ Care for Old People: Opinion 🏷 The best form of care for the elderly depends on the family situation. 🏷 It depends on whether family members have the time and resources. 🏷 We all have a responsibility towards the older people in our society. 🏷 Governments should invest money in facilities and training for care workers. #IELTS_ideas #Writing9 #Part2 ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

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​​#Essay295 #Writing #Task2 ☘️ Agree / Disagree ✅ Q: Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion? 💡 Answer: The protection of wildlife has become a frequent subject of debate with strong arguments for and against. Personally, I believe that humans are paying too much attention and allocating too many resources to this issue, as will now be explained. Firstly, if we allow any species to disappear, this is actually not a disaster. Some people may argue that the biology will be seriously affected if birds and wild animals are on the verge of extinction, but this is an exaggeration. Fossil evidence suggests that the mass disappearance of the dinosaur did not cause any harm to other species on the Earth but merely triggered the emergence of others such as the mammal. Therefore, we should not devote too much attention to the protection of wildlife. Secondly, public money is limited. This means that the national budget should be allocated to more urgent issues rather than expending too much in the conservation of wild animals and birds. For example, more resources should be diverted to medical research to find out remedies for fatal diseases such as HIV and cancer, which may help to save thousands of lives in society. Finally, the government can simply protect wildlife by continuing campaigns to raise public awareness of the protection of wildlife habitats, or impose stricter punishments on activities that may harm wild animals. Any individual who hunts wildlife for food or for pleasure should be given a heavy fine, and this may discourage them from threatening the life of wild animals. In conclusion, while I do not refute the argument for the conservation of wildlife, I believe that it should attract less attention and fewer resources from the public. ✍️ Total words: 276 📍Band: 7.0+ 👉@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣

🔖 The Bumblebee According to scientists, the bumblebee's body is too heavy and its wing span too small. Aerodynamically, the bumblebee cannot fly. But the bumblebee doesn't know that and it keeps flying. When you don't know your limitations, you go out and surprise yourself. In hindsight, you wonder if you had any limitations. The only limitations a person has are those that are self-imposed. Don't let education put limitations on you.  #motivation #ReadingTime #Short_stories ✅@Essays_band9-Road to band 9️⃣