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Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of modern society. Some people think that we must return to older more traditional values such as respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#writingsample #writing #ielts Our modern life is characterized by people seeking self-interest and material wealth. While I agree that some traditional values should be reintroduced to our society to improve lives, I maintain that our tendency to act selfishly has been paramount in most of our achievements as a species. On the one hand, it is hard to deny that we owe many of our successes to the very greed and selfishness that are often seen in a negative light. When people seek self-interest, it does not necessarily mean that others will suffer. In fact, this can help to improve people’s lives as a result. For instance, when a self-centered entrepreneur sets up a new factory in a certain neighborhood, they might not be driven by noble causes. Perhaps they are simply aiming to make a profit. However, their actions will usually benefit the community at the same time, where people can find jobs more easily. Another by-product is the benefit to consumers, who can now find their needed products more easily. Nevertheless, this obsession with our own desires might not be healthy. One obvious problem is its negative effect on our relationships with the members of our family and community. When people only think about their own benefit, they usually stop communicating and helping others around them, and they become more isolated. While this might prevent them from receiving help in difficult situations, it will also damage their mental health. As a social species, humans need emotional support from their close ones, but our current lifestyle does not fulfill this demand. As a result, many people today struggle with loneliness and depression worldwide despite their success in various other domains. Therefore, traditional values teaching people the importance of the family and the community could help to fight such problems. In conclusion, our strong desire to do things that benefit us does not have to be a bad thing. However, adhering to traditional values that stress the role of family and community will help us make the world a better place to live by improving our mental health and satisfying our emotional needs. @preparationforieltss @preparationforieltssbot

😎😎😎 رايتينگ ٧ يكي از بچه ها🤩😍 خدايي تشويق نداره؟ پشت اين نمره ها ساعت ها درس خوندن و عقب نكشيدن، برنامه درست و هوشمندانه درس خوندنه 🤓 از فرصتاتون حسابي استفاده كنيد، ديدن نتيجه خوب به همه سختياي مسير ميارزه🥹 #رضايت_تصحيح #فيدبك_رايتينگ @preparationforieltssbot @preparationforieltssbot

Some feel executives in large companies should receive high salaries while others think they are paid too much compared to ordinary workers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ۲ نفر اولی که این رایتینگ رو بنویسن بفرستن، کاملا رایگان رایتینگشون چک میشه😍 فايل ورد رايتينگتون رو داخل بات بفرستين. @preparationforieltssbot

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🥰🥰🥰 يكي ديگه از بچه هام هم نتيجشو گرفت و خوشحالم كرد. بچه ها درسته كه براي مدتي جلوي ازمون رو گرفتن ولي مطمئن باشيد بازم همه چي به روال سابق برميگرده، تو اين مدت به جاي اينكه انگيزتونو از دست بدين بهتره كه با يه برنامه ريزي درست از اين مدت استفاده كنيد و خوب درس بخونيد و اينو در نظر بگيريد يه غفلت كوچيك تو روند اماده شدن براي ايلتس ميتونه ماها شما رو عقب بندازه. تو اين مدت هر كمكى كه من از دستم بر بياد دريغ نميكنم🥰❤️ ميتونيد مشاوره رايگان براي برنامه ريزي بگيريد و پكيج تصحيح رايتينگ رو با تخفيف ثبت نام كنيد ( تا جمعه تمديد شد🥳) #رضايت_تصحيح #فيدبك_رايتينگ @preparationforieltssbot @preparationforieltssbot

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ #writing #Task2 #writingsample 🌴Agree / Disagree

✅ Q: The land for parks is wasted and should be used for other purposes. Do you agree or disagree?

Parks are a feature of many, if not most, urban settings. However, there is an argument that the land used for parks in towns and cities should be used for alternative purposes. I strongly disagree with this idea. Firstly, experts agree that the best way to restore body and mind is to spend time in nature, and do regular physical exercise there. This is crucial because the majority of the population in many countries live in cities. As society becomes more centered on city life, people tend to become sedentary and stay indoors. Recent studies have also shown that spending long periods of time in built-up areas results in emotional fatigue and poor concentration. On the other hand, time spent in parks has the opposite effects. For example, the British report a high level of satisfaction when they spend most of their holidays outdoors in their National Trust parks. Perhaps the rest of the world should follow their lead. Moreover, teenagers are the most negatively affected by the city life. Some parents are reluctant to let their children play freely in town, concerned about their health and safety, and so those youngsters miss out on being out in the natural environment and have no chance to do regular physical activities. That leads to an increased risk of childhood obesity and depression, hence the pressing need for municipal parks. On top of this, parks provide essential green space in the city and help keep the level of pollutants and greenhouse gases down. Those gases emitted by vehicles are responsible for thousands of deaths per year as well as for the rising incidence of lung cancer in children. However, the vegetation in the parks removes pollutants while the leaves filter the carbon dioxide and release oxygen. Thus, city parks function as a green lung in urban areas which helps keep us healthy. In summary, although some argue that the land for parks in urban areas is wasted, the benefits that parks have been contributing to our societies are undeniable, so obviously I do not support the idea of using that land for other purposes. 🔥Band: 7.5+ @preparationforieltssbot @preparationforieltss