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Noticed that the channel is getting too inactive. So, I decided to share part 2 records everyday.
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Breakdown score
Task Achievement:
You provided a clear overview of the main trends in the data, as well as detailed observations about specific points.
The information was relevant and was well-selected.
Score: 8
Coherence and Cohesion:
Your ideas were structured logically, and you made good use of paragraphs.
There's a clear progression of ideas and information throughout the essay.
Score: 7.5
Lexical Resource:
The vocabulary was quite varied, with terms like "alterations," "all-time high," and "environmentally friendly."
No major repetitions and the word choices were mostly accurate.
Score: 7.5
Grammatical Range and Accuracy:
The sentences were varied and generally well-constructed.
There are a few minor errors such as "alongside with" (it should be "alongside"), and "busses" (it should be "buses").
Score: 7
Overall, your essay for IELTS Writing Task 1 would likely achieve an approximate band score of 7.5. Remember, the final score would be an average of the four categories. You did a commendable job in presenting the data and drawing relevant conclusions. A bit more attention to detail in grammar can help you reach a higher band score.
Comments by Chatgpt 4 brother on the report.
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The charts show the alterations in the number of vehicles in England and Wales, alongside the CO2 emissions they generated from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, both the number of vehicles and their CO2 emissions in England and Wales experienced an upward trend over the two decades, with cars being the most significant contributor.
In detail, in 2000 there were 20 million vehicles in England and Wales and this figure increased gradually over the period, peaking at 60 million at the end.
Examining the CO2 emissions from the four types of vehicles, cars led the chart with just over 2 tonnes. The figure then saw a gradual rise, reaching an all-time high of 3 tonnes in the final year.
Trucks, which began at slightly above 0.5 tonnes in 2000, emerged as the second-highest polluter. During the first decade, it also went up gradually. After that, it sped up this rise, reaching its high of over 1 tonne in 2020.
In comparison, vans emitted 0.5 tonnes of exhaust fumes at the beginning and experienced a slight rise over a decade after which it remained at just over 0.5 tonnes until the end. Busses almost exactly mirrored this trend, beginning the period with the lowest amount of CO2 (around 0.3 tonnes) and ending with 0.5 in the final year. This means they were the most environmentally friendly vehicles compared to other modes
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Tuition fee (per semester) at Chonnam National University
It varies based on the major you apply for:
Engineering - $2345
Veterinary science - $2980
Pharmacy - $2385
Arts - $2715
Medicine/Dentistry - $3400
Natural science & Physical Education - $2290
Humanities & Social science - $1775
The last department includes my major as well but fortunately for the first semester it is totally free for me.
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Tuition fee (per semester) at Chonnam National University
It varies based on the major you apply for:
Engineering - $2345
Veterinary science - $2980
Pharmacy - $2385
Arts - $2715
Medicine/Dentistry - $3400
Natural science & Physical Education - $2290
Humanities & Social science - $1775
The last department includes my major as well but fortunately for the first semester it is totally free for me.
if you find these posts helpful, invite your friends)
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Specific information about the admission evaluation process
In total, you are going to gain 100 points;
- 50 for language proficiency
- 50 for academic performance
Additionally, your study plan, how well you know this plan, basic understanding of your potential major and speaking interview also play a role in assessing your admission. Try to learn your study plan perfectly; Be ready to receive several questions on this and answer them with precision using specific terms in your major.
Ps: You will definitely get the question – why did you choose out university; I applied for 4 universities and got the same question first in each of my interviews
Dont forget to leave reactions
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Specific information about the admission evaluation process
In total, you are going to gain 100 points;
- 50 for language proficiency
- 50 for academic performance
Additionally, your study plan, how well you know this plan, basic understanding of your potential major and speaking interview also play a role in assessing your admission. Try to learn your study plan perfectly; Be ready to receive several questions on this and answer them with precision using specific terms in your major.
Ps: You will definitely get the question – why did you choose out university; I applied for 4 universities and got the same question first in each of my interviews
Don't forget to leave reactions
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Specific information about the admission evaluation process
In total, you are going to gain 100 points;
- 50 for language proficiency
- 50 for academic performance
Additionally, your study plan, how well you know this plan, basic understanding of your potential major and speaking interview also play a role in assessing your admission. Try to learn your study plan perfectly; Be ready to receive several questions on this and answer them with precision using specific terms in your major.
Ps: You will definitely get the question – why did you choose out university; I applied for 4 universities and got the same question first in each of my interviews
Don't forget to leave reactions
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Specific information about the admission evaluation process
In total, you are going to gain 100 points;
- 50 for language proficiency
- 50 for academic performance
Additionally, your study plan, how well you know this plan, basic understanding of your potential major and speaking interview also play a role in assessing your admission. Try to learn your study plan perfectly; Be ready to receive several questions on this and answer them with precision using specific terms in your major.
Ps: You will definitely get the question – why did you choose out university; I applied for 4 universities and got the same question first in each of my interviews
Dont forget to leave reactions
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Scholarship Opportunities of Chonnam National University (ranking 751-800)
It basically offers four different types of scholarships:
1. Global scholarship - 100% tuition fee;
2. Topic scholarship - 100% tuition fee;
3. SRS – 100% tuition fee;
4. Academic excellence scholarship - 50%;
The first type is the one I earned for my master’s degree. So, believe me it is not as difficult as a lot of people comment on; As long as you have got a good previous academic performance, satisfactory language certificate, basic understanding of your major and solid study plan, you can hope for the global scholarship.
Ps: Note that they are all only for the first semester.
Send this post to those who wanna study in CNU
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Private universities vs top-ranking National ones
Why do have to go for Top-ranking National Universities rather than easily getting private universities?
1. Mostly top-national universities give full wavier scholarships while the private ones offer 70% maximum.
2. The cost of tuition fee is also considerably cheaper compared to the other types.
3. The quality of the education also plays a role when we compare top-ranking national universities and the other types.
Thus, though agencies you work with entice you choose private, non-top ranking institutions, don't fall into their trap. Such universities usually give even 50% tuition fee scholarship though you satisfy their least requirement and then from the second semester on you are to pay the full tuition which is really expensive.
Ps: Share this post with those who are about study in South Korea.
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