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Ielts Writing task 1 and task 2

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Alpomish dostonidan ham uzun bup ketibdiku bu essay😁🌚!
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In our current capitalist society, it has become increasingly commonplace for business executives to command much larger compensation packages compared to regular employees, particularly in developed countries. While there are valid concerns about such high salaries, I am in favor of them. Critics of substantial director wages cite entrepreneurial and social justifications for their stance. On an entrepreneurial level, when ordinary employees see a significant diparity in compensation between themselves and company directors, they might feel undervalued and unsupported, leading to lower morale and decreased motivation. In response to such a wide pay gap, regular staff members not only may refuse to perform at their best, ultimately compromising overall productivity and output, but also may seek opportunities elsewhere, resulting in diminished loyalty and retention. On a broader societal scale, the implications of such remuneration are even more profound. With widespread disparities in compensation can come income inequality and social unrest. If normal workers are not adequately compensated compared to company managers, regardless of their hard work and dedication, they are likely to experience feelings of unfairness and disenfranchisement. In a world where individuals struggle to afford even their basic necessities, let alone enjoy a comfortable standard of living, heightened financial disparities can exacerbate social tensions. Despite these arguments against high executive salaries, I am supportive of them. For one thing, such remuneration is essential to attract and retain top talent. Company directors are usually required to make critical decisions, solve complex problems, and nurture a positive work culture, all of which significantly impact the sustainability and success of an organization. Therefore, it is imperative to offer competitive wages to lure individuals with the necessary expertise and experience. For another, the burden of responsibilities and pressures that come with being a director of large organizations justifies the high compensation they receive. In fact, company managers are notorious for their long working hours, heavy workloads, and compromised work-life balance, all of which collectively take a toll on their psychological and physical well-being. The greater range of obligations one had, the greater their earnings should be. In conclusion, while providing company executives with larger compensation packages than ordinary employees can potentially result in compromised workplace productivity and social cohesion, I believe that this practice ultimately does more good than harm. Only through high salaries can companies attract and reward their directors. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T
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Hozirgi Writing kursni atigi 100 ming sum qilganimni sababi, yana natijani oshirishga kafolat berganim sababi, odamlar hech narsani yuqotmasligini bilib qo’shilib ko’rsin degan edim. Agar men kursni narxini sifatiga qarab qo’yganimda edi boshqa hamma kursdan qimmat qilgan bo’lardim. Chunki deyarli hech qaysi instructor uslublari tug’ri yoke notug’riligini bilish uchun har oy examga kirib experiment qilib chiqmaydi: har bir uslubni o’zi ishlab chiqmaydi: har bir articleni o’zi tuzib chiqmaydi: kursdagi har bir darsga faol qatnashsangiz darajangizni har oy 1 ballga oshirish kafolatini bermaydi! @WRITING_T
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Avvallari mana bunga o’xshagan uzun postlar tashlab turardim: hozir ham bunaqa postlarni o’zim uchun yozaman lekin kanalga ulashmayman. Chunki endi ko’pchilikka yordam berishni iloji yuq: avval biror bir xabar orqali jahlingizni chiqarib biroz o’ylashga va harakat qilishga undagan bo’lsam endi 90% odam uzun postni hatto oxirigacha o’qimaydi, ovozli xabarni hatto eshitmaydi. Axir Tik Tok yoke Instagramda hayotini odamlarni e’tibori uchun sotib bo’lgan qullar sizni kunglingizni olish uchun “Hali hammasi yaxshi bo’ladi, sening ham kuning keladi, ayrim gullar biroz kechroq gullaydi” kabi xabarlar turganda kim ham hayotini shuncha qismini aslida yashamasdan shunchaki tirik bo’libgina o’tkazvorganini bilgisi keladi. Ajoyib!!! @WRITING_T
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Writing kursiga qabul tugashiga 2 kun qoldi.. Bu writing kursi atigi 100mingdan va bu imkoniyat boshqa bo’lmasligi mumkin Bu writing kursi orqali darajangiz 1 ballga oshadi Xaftada 6 kun dars Kursga qatnashish uchun adminga yozing Admin @ielts_admine
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Writing kurs ikki kunda boshlanadi: buyog’i ketgani-ketgan endi!
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20 MINUTES!
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Assalomu alaykum my friends, mana bu topic 27-Aprel kuni real examda tushgan ekan. Shunga bugun kechga soat 21:00 da birgalikda kecha tahlil qilgan articledan foydalanib 9.0 ballik essay yozsak nima deysizlar? @WRITING_T
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Guys, ming yil umr ko’rish qanaqa bo’ladi?
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✅ARTICLE ANALYSIS! 📝 Employee morale and productivity @WRITING_T
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ANALYSED PDF [employee morale and productivity] @WRITING_T
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https://t.me/writing_t?livestream=0c6539d2f589db3a38
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✅IELTS-7.0! It is an honor to make a difference in people's lives, no matter how small my contribution is! @WRITING_T
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✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ @WRITING_T
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Assalomu alaykum my friends: would you like to join another video lesson tonight at 21:00 o'clock? We will analyze this article, broaden our vocabulary and activate a range of complex grammar structures, thus honing our Writing and Reading skills. @WRITING_T
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✅RIPPLE-EFFECT APPROACH! @WRITING_T
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https://t.me/writing_t?livestream=aea96bc327050ca7a6
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20 MINUTES!
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My friends, bugungi darsda - har bir gapda o'zi nechta idea berish kerakligi - har bir paragraphni qaysi structure bilan boshlab qaysi structure bilan tugatish kerakligi - har bir ideani qanaqa vocabularydan foydalanib berish kerakligi -bu jarayonda ChatGPT dan qanday foydalanishingiz kerakligini ham ko'rsataman.
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💥TESTS ARE OPPORTUNITIES💥 ✨✨ If someone prays for patience, does God give them patience or the opportunity to be patient? ✨✨ @WRITING_T
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Assalomu alaykum, bugun kechga soat 21:00 da mana bu IELTS Writing uslublaridan bittasi haqida dars o’tib beraymi?
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Assalomu alaykum, bugun kechga soat 21:00 da mana bu IELTS Writing uslublaridan bittasi haqida dars o’tib beraymi?
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Bu Writing kurs 5-Maydan boshlanadi! 1️⃣ Kurs davomida Dushanba, Chorshanba va Juma kunlari ertalab video darslar tashlanadi va Seshanba, Payshanba, va Shanba kunlari kechga soat 21:00 dan 23:00 gacha jonli darslar bo’ladi. 2️⃣Kursga qatnashish uchun Writing darajangiz kamida intermediate bo’lsa yetadi: ko’pi bilan esa IELTS Writingdan 7.0 7.5 olib bo’lgan bo’lsangiz ham bo’ladi. ‼️ Kursga qatnashish uchun @IELTS_Admine ga murojaat qilib 100 ming to’lov qilsangiz bo’ldi! @WRITING_T
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Some people think it is more important to construct new buildings rather than wasting money on maintaining old ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree? With shifting societal needs and evolving architectural standards, it has become increasingly common for countries to invest in the construction of new public structures at the expense of existing ones, particularly in city centers. I am in favor of this practice. There are several reasons why older buildings should be replaced with new ones. From a practical perspective, the erection of brand-new structures in place of former buildings enhances public safety. Unlike older structures, which may pose risks due to weakened foundations, structural cracks, and outdated materials, new counterparts are designed to adhere to current safety guidelines. Equipped with state-of-the-art technologies, newly constructed buildings often incorporate features such as fire suppression systems, emergency exits, and security monitoring elements. Given the safe nature of these modern buildings, it is justifiable for governments to support their construction, even if this comes at the cost of historical sites. Of equal significance is the focus on environmental sustainability. With heightened recognition of ecological issues like climate change and air pollution, urban development engineers now put a premium on eco-friendliness. Constructed with eco-friendly materials and methods, modern public structures minimize energy consumption related to heating, cooling, and lighting, which can lead to a decrease in greenhouse gas emissions and contribute to the overall reduction of a city's carbon footprint. A case in point is my home country of Uzbekistan, where an increasing number of public buildings now integrate green roofs and rain gardens, leading to environmentally friendly cities. In conclusion, I support the idea of erecting new public buildings rather than renovating and maintaining old ones on the grounds that it aligns with safety and environmental considerations. Only through the replacement of old structures with modern constructions can strides be made in ensuring public safety and promoting a greener future for our cities. Suhrobjon Abdivaliev @WRITING_T
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‼️Agar men IELTS dan 9.0 olganimdan keyin bitta tekinga to’liq IELTS kurs ochsam ham ayrimlar shu kursga ham qatnashmasdi! 🤔Nega bunaqaligini bilasizmi? @WRITING_T
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Bu kurs uchun 250 ming to’lov qilib qo’yganlarni hammasiga 150 ming qaytarib beriladi!
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Bu Online Writing kursga qatnashish uchun @IELTS_Admine ga murojaat qilib to’lov qilingizlar!
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Bu kursga qo’shilish uchun sizlardan nima talab qilinadi? 1️⃣ IELTS dan tayyorlanadigan, darajasi eng kamida intermediate bo’lgan tanishlaringizga ham mana shu kurs haqida xabar berishingiz. Telegramdagi guruhlarda yoke kanallarda odamlarni jig’iga tegib kursni reklama qilishingiz shartmas, shunchaki o’zlaringiz bilgan odamlarga IELTS Writingdan bir oyda kamida 0.5 yoke 1.0 ball o’sishga erishishni kafolatlaydigan atigi 100 ming sumlik kurs borligini aytib qo’ysangiz bo’ldi. Bu Online Writing kursga qatnashuvchilar qanchalik ko’p va faol bo’lsa hali men sizlarga xuddi shunday Speaking yoke Listening va Reading kurslar ham ochib berishga harakat qilaman. 2️⃣ Kursni jiddiy qabul qilingizlar. Kursga boshqa kurslardan arzonligi uchun emas, pulingizni tejash uchun emas, balki boshqa kurslardan yaxshiroq ekanligi uchun va vaqtingizni tejash uchun qatnashing.
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✨✨ IELTS Writing qismidan qiynaladiganlar uchun men hali hech kim bermagan imkoniyatni bermoqchiman! ✨✨ Maydan boshlanadigan Writing kursimizga atigi 100 ming sum bilan qo’shilish imkoniyatini bermoqchiman! ✨✨ Bu kursda ham har haftada 6 marta dars bo’ladi nafaqat Writingni oshirish uchun, balki Grammar va Vocabni mukammal darajaga olib chiqish uchun. ✨✨ Eng qizig’i nima bilasizmi? Agar har bir darsga faol qatnashib ham Writing darajangizni har oy eng kamida 0.5 yoke 1.0 ballga oshirolmasangiz shu 100 ming kurs to’lovini ham qaytarib olishingiz mumkin. ‼️ Faqat bu kursda qatnashishingiz uchun sizdan bitta narsa talab qilinadi?!?!
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🤔Bir oyda Writingdan 1.5 ball o’sish bu yomonmas menimcha! ✅Agar meni o’zim ham Ripple-effect approach mavzusini yaxshiroq urganib, Recent social changes haqidagi articleni mukammal aktiv qilganimda edi, oxirgi imtihonda Writingdan 8.5 emas 9.0 olsam bo’lardi. @WRITING_T
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Writing kurs bo’yicha ertaga sizlarga jinnicha imkon beraman. Adminga murojaat qilmay turingizlar!
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✅CEFR candidates are also gaining from our Writing courses! @WRITING_T
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🔥BOOOOOOOOM BOOOOOOOOM BOOOOOOOOOOM🔥 My friends, jinnicha yangilik bor! Maydan boshlab meni o’zim Samarqanddagi o’quv markazimizda 2 ta Beginner guruh, 2 ta Intermediate guruh va meni o’zimda tayyorlanib allaqachon 5.5 6.0 6.5 olib bo’lganlar uchun 1 ta guruh ochayabman. Dunyo qarashingiz, shaxsiy intizom va hayotingizni o’zgartirishga tayyormisiz? Potensialingizni kashf qilishga-chi?
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⚡️WRITING COURSE⚡️ 📎ONLINE! 📌Tutor: Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev (Writing - 8.5 twice ) 📌Kurs narxi: 250 000 sums. 📌Boshlanish sanasi: 1-may Admin -> @ielts_admine ✔️ Darajangiz kamida intermediate bo'lishi kerak. Writing demo darsi Bizda natijalar gapiradi..☄️ Jafar (Overall 8.0 R 8.5 W 7.0) Farangiz (Overall 8.0 R 8.5 W 7.0) Asror (Overall 8.0 writing 7.0) Muhammadaziz writing 7.0 Muzaffar (Overall 7.0 Writing 7.5) Dilshodbek (Overall 7.5 writing 7.5 Neha writing 7.5 Mutalibov writing 7.0 Shaxruza Writing 7.0 Shohrux writing 7.0 Madina writing 7.0 Gaybullayeva writing 7.0 Tumaris (Overall 7.0) Gulbaxor (Overall 7.0 writing7.0) Ismoilxon (Overall 7.0 Age 15) Fozilbek (Overall 7.0 R 7.0 W 7.0) Shohista (Writing 7.0) Maxliyo (Writing 7.0) Mag'rurbek writing 7.0 Shoxsanam (Cefr Writing 73) Va 4000 dan ziyod xuddi shunday shogirtlar...
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Guys, an unusual question! Oxirgi marta qachon zahar ichdingiz? Yoke hech bo’lmaganda qachon aynigan taom yedingiz? @WRITING_T
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Personality qualities [Analyzed PDF] @WRITING_T
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Writing kurs davomida: Mana shunday uslub, article analysis tashlanadi: 48 soatdan keyin esa jonli dars bo’ladi har bir uslub, structure, vocabni birgalikda mukammal aktiv qilishimiz uchun!
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PERSONALITY TRAITS! @WRITING_T
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Alpomish dostonidan ham uzun bup ketibdiku bu essay😁🌚!
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In our current capitalist society, it has become increasingly commonplace for business executives to command much larger compensation packages compared to regular employees, particularly in developed countries. While there are valid concerns about such high salaries, I am in favor of them. Critics of substantial director wages cite entrepreneurial and social justifications for their stance. On an entrepreneurial level, when ordinary employees see a significant diparity in compensation between themselves and company directors, they might feel undervalued and unsupported, leading to lower morale and decreased motivation. In response to such a wide pay gap, regular staff members not only may refuse to perform at their best, ultimately compromising overall productivity and output, but also may seek opportunities elsewhere, resulting in diminished loyalty and retention. On a broader societal scale, the implications of such remuneration are even more profound. With widespread disparities in compensation can come income inequality and social unrest. If normal workers are not adequately compensated compared to company managers, regardless of their hard work and dedication, they are likely to experience feelings of unfairness and disenfranchisement. In a world where individuals struggle to afford even their basic necessities, let alone enjoy a comfortable standard of living, heightened financial disparities can exacerbate social tensions. Despite these arguments against high executive salaries, I am supportive of them. For one thing, such remuneration is essential to attract and retain top talent. Company directors are usually required to make critical decisions, solve complex problems, and nurture a positive work culture, all of which significantly impact the sustainability and success of an organization. Therefore, it is imperative to offer competitive wages to lure individuals with the necessary expertise and experience. For another, the burden of responsibilities and pressures that come with being a director of large organizations justifies the high compensation they receive. In fact, company managers are notorious for their long working hours, heavy workloads, and compromised work-life balance, all of which collectively take a toll on their psychological and physical well-being. The greater range of obligations one had, the greater their earnings should be. In conclusion, while providing company executives with larger compensation packages than ordinary employees can potentially result in compromised workplace productivity and social cohesion, I believe that this practice ultimately does more good than harm. Only through high salaries can companies attract and reward their directors.
Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T
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Hozirgi Writing kursni atigi 100 ming sum qilganimni sababi, yana natijani oshirishga kafolat berganim sababi, odamlar hech narsani yuqotmasligini bilib qo’shilib ko’rsin degan edim. Agar men kursni narxini sifatiga qarab qo’yganimda edi boshqa hamma kursdan qimmat qilgan bo’lardim. Chunki deyarli hech qaysi instructor uslublari tug’ri yoke notug’riligini bilish uchun har oy examga kirib experiment qilib chiqmaydi: har bir uslubni o’zi ishlab chiqmaydi: har bir articleni o’zi tuzib chiqmaydi: kursdagi har bir darsga faol qatnashsangiz darajangizni har oy 1 ballga oshirish kafolatini bermaydi! @WRITING_T
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Avvallari mana bunga o’xshagan uzun postlar tashlab turardim: hozir ham bunaqa postlarni o’zim uchun yozaman lekin kanalga ulashmayman. Chunki endi ko’pchilikka yordam berishni iloji yuq: avval biror bir xabar orqali jahlingizni chiqarib biroz o’ylashga va harakat qilishga undagan bo’lsam endi 90% odam uzun postni hatto oxirigacha o’qimaydi, ovozli xabarni hatto eshitmaydi. Axir Tik Tok yoke Instagramda hayotini odamlarni e’tibori uchun sotib bo’lgan qullar sizni kunglingizni olish uchun “Hali hammasi yaxshi bo’ladi, sening ham kuning keladi, ayrim gullar biroz kechroq gullaydi” kabi xabarlar turganda kim ham hayotini shuncha qismini aslida yashamasdan shunchaki tirik bo’libgina o’tkazvorganini bilgisi keladi. Ajoyib!!! @WRITING_T
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Writing kursiga qabul tugashiga 2 kun qoldi.. Bu writing kursi atigi 100mingdan va bu imkoniyat boshqa bo’lmasligi mumkin Bu writing kursi orqali darajangiz 1 ballga oshadi Xaftada 6 kun dars Kursga qatnashish uchun adminga yozing Admin @ielts_admine
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Writing kurs ikki kunda boshlanadi: buyog’i ketgani-ketgan endi!
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20 MINUTES!
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Assalomu alaykum my friends, mana bu topic 27-Aprel kuni real examda tushgan ekan. Shunga bugun kechga soat 21:00 da birgalikda kecha tahlil qilgan articledan foydalanib 9.0 ballik essay yozsak nima deysizlar? @WRITING_T
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Guys, ming yil umr ko’rish qanaqa bo’ladi?
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ARTICLE ANALYSIS! 📝 Employee morale and productivity @WRITING_T
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