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This week's teardown: a real About section, first two lines only. Those are all most people ever see. BEFORE: "I am a passionate and results-driven professional with over 5 years of experience in various industries. I believe in continuous learning and thrive in fast-paced environments." Problems: no role, no industry, no proof, no reader. It could describe a lawyer or a chef. "Various industries" actively removes information. AFTER: "I run customer success for B2B SaaS companies selling into non-technical industries. In my current role I cut churn from 9% to 3% across a 900-account book while running 12 to 15 tier upgrades a month. Currently exploring senior CS roles with US or EU teams, remote, with overlap to 6pm WAT." What changed: - Line 1 says what you do and for whom. "Non-technical industries" is the specific that makes it real. - Line 2 is your single strongest proof, with numbers. - Line 3 tells a recruiter exactly what to do with you, including the time-zone answer they were about to worry about. No adjectives. Adjectives are what you write when you do not have evidence. Send me your first two lines. One gets rebuilt here next Tuesday.