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Когда мы пишем проблему, нужно объяснить, почему это проблема. Например: A typical problem that can arise while visiting a museum is that tickets can be expensive. То, что билеты дорогие, это не проблема, это у вас денег нет. Например, для владельца музея это вообще не проблема, для миллионеров это не проблема. Подумаем чуть дальше. Какой из этого следует результат? Почему тот факт, что билеты дорогие, становится проблемой для многих людей? Не некоторых! А многих. so many people simply cannot afford going there. Вот теперь проблема. Такие дела.

I am currently working on a project on the most important factors teenagers in Zetland consider when choosing a travel destination, and I have found some data in the form of a pie chart – the results of the opinion polls. I would like to analyse them and express my opinion. Looking at the pie chart, I can identify some main facts. The most popular answer to the question "What is the most important factor to consider when choosing a travel destination?" is "cost" (42%), followed by "safety" (28%). AS MANY AS 18% select "culture”. The least frequently selected answers are "distance" and "natural beauty", at 10% and 2% respectively. Further analysis of the responses to the opinion poll question reveals that the proportion of the people who single out "safety" is higher than that of those who opt for "culture", at 28% and 18% respectively. This is not surprising because one would not be able to enjoy the local culture if they feel uneasy in a dangerous place. It is worth mentioning that there is a typical problem that one can face while having a holiday - one can get lost and get into trouble. The way forward might be to install a special application on one's phone which will have travellers to find their way around. In conclusion, I believe that the best travelling destinations in my country are Sochi and the Altai Republic. This is because there are spectacular views and one can relax and unwind.

Хм, я тут вижу повтор в третьем параграфе, нот гуд. Варианты замены для opt for 1) choose 2) select

Самый легкий шаблон параграфов 2 и 3 ever! Выучить и подставлять опции! I am currently working on a project on the most important factors teenagers in Zetland consider when choosing a language tutor, and I have found some data in the form of a pie chart – the results of the opinion polls. I would like to analyse them and express my opinion. Looking at the pie chart, I can identify some main facts. The most popular answer to the question "What is the most important factor when you choose a language tutor?" is "price of one lesson" (42%), followed by "teacher’s personality" (28%). 18% select "qualifications”. The least frequently selected answers are "flexibility" and "reviews, at 10% and 2% respectively. Further analysis of the responses to the opinion poll question reveals that the proportion of the people who opt for "teacher’s personality" is higher than that of those who opt for "qualifications", at 28%and 18% respectively. This is not surprising because a teacher with a great personality can inspire a student to study harder. At the same time, qualifications are not always very important if a teacher is really inspiring. It is worth mentioning that there is a typical problem that one can face while choosing a tutor - there are so many of them these days that it can be hard to choose the right one. The way forward might be to ask a few teachers for a free demo lesson and then decide which is the best. In conclusion, I believe that choosing a good tutor is very important. This is because they can encourage students to study and can always support them if they face any difficulties.

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I am currently working on a project on why teenagers in Zetland do extreme sports, and I have found some data in the form of a table – the results of the opinion polls. I would like to analyse them and express my opinion. Looking at the table, I can identify some main facts. The most popular answer to the question "Why do you do extreme sports?" is "to get some adrenaline" (49%), followed by "to follow modern trends" (17%). 13% select "to increase self-confidence". The least frequently selected answers are "to fight fears and stress" and "to explore one's limits, at 12 % and 9% respectively. Further analysis of the responses to the opinion poll question reveals that the proportion of the people who opt for "to get some adrenaline" is higher than that of those who opt for "to increase self-confidence", at 49% and 13% respectively. This is not surprising because people who do extreme sports are addicted to adrenaline. At the same time, risky sports are very challenging so many people fail or get injured which does not increase their self-confidence. It is worth mentioning that there is a typical problem that one can face while doing an extreme sport -the chances of breaking a limb are very high. The way forward might be to do extreme sports under professional supervision and use only high-quality equipment. In conclusion, I believe that extreme sports play an important role in the lives of young people. This is because such sports bring them plenty of new emotions and help to relieve stress.

ОТВЕТ ОТ ФИПИ по животрепещущим вопросам. Отвечает Александр Друзь Мария Вербицкая 1. В задании 38 НЕ будет ошибкой писать the majority of the respondents select «option_name» относительно самого высокого показателя в таблице/диаграмме, даже если он не превышает 50%. Правило, которое Вы имеете в виду, относится только к ситуации выборов (elections). 2. Можно the opinion polls заменить на some relevant opinion polls, можно повторить формулировку из задания – «большей» аутентичности от участника экзамена не требуется, артикль the как раз и несет мысль о том, что речь идет об опросах на указанную тему.

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P1: There can be not enough volunteer opportunities available.

S: Try finding local organizations, community centers, or online platforms that offer volunteer work. S2:Attend events to learn about volunteering options in your area.

P2: People do not have not enough time for volunteering.

S: select volunteer opportunities that fit one's schedule.

P3:: Volunteers often feel tired.

S: Make time for self-care and learn some basic relaxation techniques.

P4: Volunteers do not have enough skills and do not know how to do tasks properly.

S: Find organizations that provide training for volunteers.

I am currently working on a project on motivates people in Zetland to do volunteering, and I have found some data in the form of a table – the results of the opinion polls. I would like to analyse them and express my opinion. Looking at the table, I can identify some main facts. The most popular answer to the question "What motivates you to do volunteering?" is "bringing benefit, helping others" (48%), followed by "getting new knowledge, skills" (20%). The least frequently selected answer is "exploring new places" (8%). Further analysis of the responses to the opinion poll question reveals that the proportion of the people who select "finding new friends" is slightly higher than that of those who opt for "getting privileges, bonuses", at 14% and 10% respectively. Such a small gap is quite surprising because socialisation plays a very important role in our lives. At the same time, there is no direct link between volunteering and getting privileges. It is worth mentioning that there is a typical problem that can arise with volunteer work - it can be hard to balance one's time between volunteering and work or studies . The way forward might be to do a time management course and learn to manage one's time more effectively. In conclusion, I believe that volunteering is very important for the society. This is because it can make the difference in people's lives and make the society kinder and more generous.

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