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I am currently working on a project on things teenagers in Zetland like doing when they travel, and I have found some data in the form of a pie chart – the results of the opinion polls. I would like to analyse them and express my opinion. Looking at the pie chart, I can identify some main facts. While the most important aspect of travelling for the majority of the respondents is seeing new places (33%)б followed by relaxing (30%), a very small proportion of those surveyed believe that for them meeting new people is of utmost importance when they travel. Further analysis of the responses to the opinion poll question "What aspect of travelling do you find the most important?" reveals that the proportion of the teenagers who select "trying new activities" is higher than that of those who opt for "sampling local food", at 18% and 12% respectively. This is not surprising because new activities always bring new emotions, while local food can be too unusual for travellers. It is worth mentioning that there is a typical problem that one can face on holiday - it can be hard to plan one's budget and it can result in overspending . The way forward might be to do a money management course and learn to manage one's money more effectively. In conclusion, I believe that the best place to spend a holiday in my area is a small town called Dubna in the vicinity of Moscow. This is because this town is very quiet and peaceful and one can relax and recharge their batteries.

Эх, такую идею зарубили. Пойду плакать.

Мой экспериментальный шаблон комментариев с Россией провален, меня раскусили

At the moment, I am working on a project on the most common complaints teenagers in Zetland make about airlines and I have found a table with the results of the opinion polls.Now I would like to analyse them and give my opinion on my favourite airline. According to the table “long queues and delays” is the most popular answer to the question “What problems do you often face while flying?” (41 %), followed by "poor cleanliness and hygiene" (20%). The least popular option is “limited or expensive amenities”, at 5%. Further analysis reveals that the proportion of the people who complain about insufficient or inaccurate information is almost the same as that of those who are unhappy about rude or unhelpful staff, at 16% and 18% respectively. This can be explained by the fact that unhelpful or rude personnel is often unwilling to provide sufficient and accurate information.

P1: people do not know much about animal rights and conservation.

S1: the government should introduce educational programs in schools and communities. S2: the government should provide information via social media, or organise local events to raise awareness about animal rights and conservation.

P2: Human activities lead to habitat loss.

S: the government should support initiatives that protect and restore natural habitats.

сравнения и комментарии выше! feel free to contribute your ideas!

#вербицкая_вариант13 #online_shopping Problems with online shopping

Problem 1: It can be hard to find what you want when shopping online.

Solution 1: Use the search filters and categories on the website to help you find what you're looking for. Solution 2: Read the descriptions and reviews from other customers to get more information.

Problem 2: it can be hard to understand if the product is good

Solution 1: Check the ratings and reviews from previous buyers. Solution 2: Look for well-known brands and sellers which you trust. Solution 3: Read the descriptions carefully.

Problem 3: it can be dangerous as one's personal data can be stolen.

Solution: Buy from websites that have secure payment options.

Problem 4: There are often delays or mistakes in product delivery

Solution 1: Before you buy, check how long it will take for the product to arrive. Solution 2: Use the tracking number to keep track of your order. You can ask for a refund or replacement if your order does not arrive on time or if you receive smth different from what you ordered.

Problem 5: it is hard to return or exchange items you bought.

Solution 1: Before you make a purchase, make sure you understand the store's return and exchange policies. Solution 2: Contact customer support and follow their instructions.

Для тех, кто любит котиков, есть забавная фича от телеграм. https://t.me/setlanguage/forcatsandkitties

По многочисленным вопросам (которые звучат в моей голове) хочу объяснить, почему в этом канале: 1) закрыта пересылка и копирование 2) больше видео, чем текста 1) на случай, если ученики смотрят разборы, чтобы не было возможности просто скопировать вставить. По крайней мере, нужно потрудиться и переписать ручками. 2) еще лучше, если это будет «послушать и записать», чем просто переписать. Да, большой инпут полезен, так как что-то все же приклеится к голове изнутри и останется. Возможно, что-то из этих записей ляжет в основу нового пособия, где есть не столько разборы, сколько упражнения на комментарии и проблемы/решения. Тесты я все же не планирую убирать, так как возможность записать видео есть не всегда.