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IELTS Band 9.0 lik Writing Task 1 (line graph), tahlil qilib chiqing va o’zingizga c1 lik vocabulary baza tuzib oling 📊
The line graph compares how much energy was produced from three types of fuel – petroleum, coal, and natural gas – in the UK from 1981 to 2000. ——————————————— Overall, the report reveals significant shifts in the energy production levels over the period, with the figures for petroleum and natural gas experiencing a substantial increase, while the reverse was true for coal, which witnessed a pronounced decline in the production levels. It is also noteworthy that petroleum constantly remained the lead throughout, generating significantly higher quantities of energy than coal and natural gas. ——————————————— Petroleum consistently stood out as the dominant energy source in the UK despite some fluctuations. Starting at approximately 95 million tons initially, the production level increased considerably to just below 140 million tons in 1984 before remaining relatively stable over the next four years. However, this figure had fallen markedly to 100 million tons by 1991, followed by a staggering rise to reach its peak of about 150 million tons in the final year. ——————————————— Natural gas, on the other hand, mirrored the petroleum’s trend, albeit at a much slower pace. In 1981, roughly 40 million tons of energy was produced from this fuel, a figure that then showed gradual upward trends towards the end, finishing the period at 100 million tons. ——————————————— In contrast, an opposite picture was recorded/observed in the production levels from coal. In 1981, coal generated 80 million tons of energy in the UK, after which the figure dropped dramatically / halved to just below 40 million tons between in 1983 and 1984, prior to bouncing back to virtually 60 million tons in 1986. By 2000, the energy production levels from coal witnessed a steady downward trajectory to hit a low of about 40 million tons📝Essay type: Task 1 (line graph) 🔥Score: Band 9.0 (c1) Foydali bo’lgan bo’lsa reaksiya 🔥⚡️❤️😍❤️🔥🥰 bosib qo’ying 🤫 🌟 Join: @writing_essays_c1
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🌟IELTS Writing Task 2 uchun C1 level sample answer, to’liq tahlil qilib o’rganib oling!
🌟TOPIC
Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is this a positive or negative trend?🌟INTRODUCTION
Instead of creating their own food commodities, governments throughout the world are increasingly dependent on food imported from other countries. It is, in my opinion, a dangerous trend that will have a detrimental influence on the agricultural sectors of countries. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my thoughts in detail.🌟BODY PARAGRAPH 1
The disadvantage of depending on imported commodities rather than indigenous goods is that all local farmers in the nation who rely on crop sales would see a significant drop, lowering their living conditions. As a result, agricultural workers may need to seek alternative employment opportunities. Moreover, during times of crisis, nations that import products on a large scale will stop doing so, causing other countries that buy these items to suffer greatly.🌟BODY PARAGRAPH 2
Additionally, imported food is not necessarily nutritious. To preserve the food while it is transported to other parts of the world, specific chemicals are added to it. These preservatives have been linked to the development of deadly illnesses such as cancer. In addition, failing to maintain storage facilities results in significant food waste. Moreover, countries have to spend a huge amount to foreign countries in trade, and imported food is overpriced. It also has a negative impact on the nations' native cultures. In Japan, for example, where imported meals are growing more popular, people's knowledge of their own indigenous cuisines is dwindling. However, in a way, it might also be true that importing goods can provide access to some foods that would otherwise be unavailable in certain countries. Preserved foods kept for extended periods, on the other hand, can induce a range of illnesses.🌟CONCLUSION
To summarise, imports are not always beneficial, and they have a negative influence on the country's agriculture sector, weakening the country's economic position.Foydali bo’lgan bo’lsa reaksiya 🔥⚡️❤️😍❤️🔥🥰 bosib qo’ying 🤫 🌟 Join: @writing_essays_c1
