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Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev 3-yillik tajribaga IELTS INSTRUCTOR ,,Suhrob Academy" (online school) asoschisi 2000 dan ziyod shogirdlar chiqargan @WRITING_T (main channel) @suhrobacademy

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The bar chart compares American men and women across different age groups in terms of their salt consumption patterns in the year 2000. Overall, individuals of all ages exceeded the recommended salt intake levels, except for children under 6 years old, with men consistently consuming higher amounts than their female counterparts. It is also clear that salt consumption increased with age, although there is evidence of reversal among older age brackets. Beginning with the younger age categories, boys under the age of 6 consumed approximately 2000 milligrams of salt, nearly double the amount consumed by their female peers. The gender disparity narrowed down in the 6-11 age group, with boys consuming around 3500 milligrams compared to girls' consumption of 3000 milligrams. In the next age bracket, salt consumption continued to rise with age in males, reaching over 4000, while female consumption remained constant. Of particular significance is the 20-39 age category, which marked the highest consumption levels, with men peaking at 4500 milligrams and women breaching the 3100-milligram threshold. In the 40-60 age group, however, there was a decrease in salt consumption, with men reducing their intake to just below 4000 milligrams and women maintaining a level of 3000 milligrams. Interestingly, although older men continued to consume high levels of salt, women in the over-60 age bracket adhered to the recommended salt intake guidelines. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

📊TASK 1 BAR CHART! @WRITING_T
📊TASK 1 BAR CHART! @WRITING_T

Agar mana shu post bu kechgacha 500 ta mana bu qop-qora oychadan (🌚) yig’sa bugun kechga soat 21:00 da shu mavzuga birgalikda 8.0+ lik essay yozamiz! Yuqsa, o’zim yozib tashlab qoyaman!

✅Do you want a band 9.0 essay on this topic? 🤔What if we write it together tonight? @WRITING_T
Do you want a band 9.0 essay on this topic? 🤔What if we write it together tonight? @WRITING_T

✅Tabriklations! @WRITING_T
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Tabriklations! @WRITING_T

Guys, if you send me all the Writing questions that will come out in the real exam, we will write 8.0+ essays together on this channel through live lessons. So, when is the next real IELTS exam?

#13_April_Real_exam_topic With the influence of unhealthy eating habits and sedentary lifestyles, it has become increasingly common for individuals, irrespective of their age, to contend with obesity, particularly in urban areas. In response to this issue, some suggest raising the cost of fattening food products as an effective solution. While doing so is likely to offer a variety of benefits, I firmly believe that a comprehensive strategy involving both governmental interventions and individual initiatives is necessary to deal with this issue. Advocates of raising the prices of unhealthy food items cite various reasons to support their stance. By making fast food, processed meals, and sugary beverages more expensive, we can drive down the demand for these food products. In pursuit of cost savings, individuals may feel compelled to seek out healthier alternatives like traditional meals and fresh produce, leading to a shift towards a more nutritous diet and reduced risk of excessive weight gain. A good case in point is my home country of Uzbekistan, where many people, particularly those facing financial constraints, refuse to purchase calorie-dense, low-nutrient foods like processed meats and sugary drinks due to the exorbitant prices. However, tackling the obesity epidemic requires a combination of governmental policies and individual efforts. On a governmental scale, it is crucial for countries to invest in well-equipped sports facilities such as gyms and swimming pools that are easily accessible to the general public. Provided with such resources, individuals are more likely to engage in regular physical activity, thereby promoting healthy lifestyles. At the grassroots level, individuals must take responsibility for not only maintaining a balanced diet rich in essential nutrients but also incorporating regular exercise into their daily schedules. Without individual commitment to healthy living practices, simply increasing the cost of fattening food items and improving sports infrastructure may not yield optimal results in curbing obesity rates. In conclusion, while increasing the prices of fattening foods can discourage consumption of unhealthy products, I contend that a holistic approach involving both governmental initiatives and individual actions is essential in addressing the obesity crisis. Only through a combination of quality sports amenities and personal lifestyle choices can progress be made in reducing obesity levels. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

✅IELTS WRITING TASK 2! Dustlar, bu mavzu kecha real examda tushgan emish: shunga bitta 8.5 lik jinnni essaycha ko’ramizmi? @W
IELTS WRITING TASK 2! Dustlar, bu mavzu kecha real examda tushgan emish: shunga bitta 8.5 lik jinnni essaycha ko’ramizmi? @WRITING_T

People have different views as to whether private vehicles should be prohibited from downtown areas of large metropolises to make way for public transport networks. I take issue with this proposal. One of the main reasons why I am against banning cars from city centers is that it would inconvenience many people who rely on private transportation for daily purposes. Individuals with disabilities or limited access to public transit options would find it difficult to commute or run errands if such an idea was turned into reality. Since cars easily surpass buses and trains as a flexible and convenient mode of personal transport, it is unrealistic to expect city dwellers to give up private cars in favor of mass transit. Another key consideration is the potential strain that a ban on private vehicles would place on public transportation systems. Although public transport is an affordable and sustainable mode of travel, many large cities already struggle to meet the demand, particularly during peak hours. Banning personal cars from city centers could overwhelm public transport networks, leading to overcrowding, decreased service quality, and frequent delays. In a world where individuals make multiple commutes daily for school, work, and day-to-day needs, putting immense pressure on public transportation might compound traffic congestion and reduce standards of living. In conclusion, while removing private vehicles from the equation may seem like an effective solution to pollution, depletion of oil resources, traffic gridlock, and accidents, it is important to recognize the potential implications of such a measure. Prohibiting personal vehicles from city centers could not only face public objection but also put added pressure on public transport networks. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

✅IELTS WRITING TASK 2 TOPIC! 📝I wrote a relatively short essay on this topic, although it doesn’t allign with my writing sty
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 TOPIC! 📝I wrote a relatively short essay on this topic, although it doesn’t allign with my writing style. 😁I followed in Simon’s footsteps once and for all! @WRITING_T

❤️‍🔥Speaking kursi haqida❤️‍🔥 @writing_t

❤️‍🔥Online speaking course❤️‍🔥 💥Instructor-Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev (Speaking 8.5) 💥Kurs davomiyligi : 1 oy 💥Kurs narxi : 2
❤️‍🔥Online speaking course❤️‍🔥 💥Instructor-Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev (Speaking 8.5) 💥Kurs davomiyligi : 1 oy 💥Kurs narxi : 200 ming 💥Boshlanish vaqti : 15-april Kursda qatnashish uchun darajangiz kamida intermediate bo'lishi kerak. Kursga yozilishdan oldin demo darsni ko'ring 👉 demo darsni ko'rish Xaftada 3 kun vedio dars tashlanadi Kursga qatnashish uchun adminga yozing Admin 👉 @ielts_admine

Guys, bizda hozir Jafar brother Intermediate va Advanced IELTS kurslarni o’tayapdi. Men ham yana o’zi IELTS olib buganlarga kurs ochmasdan Beginner darajalarga 6-7 oylarda IELTS olish uchun Offline kurs ochsammikin. Menda vaqt judayam, judayaaaam kam: har bir soatni nimaga sarflashni juda yaxshi o’ylab ko’rishim kerak!

Seems like a good idea!
Seems like a good idea!

Offline kurs haqida ma’lumot! 🥇Darslar 21-Aprelda boshlanadi! 🥈Kursga qatnashish uchun darajangiz 5.5 6.0 6.5 yoke 7.0 bo’lishi kerak! 🥉Darslar Dushanba, Chorshanba, va Juma kunlari taxminan 2-3 soatdan bo’ladi 14:00 dan 17:00 gacha! 🏅Kurs narxi 500 000 sum bir oy uchun: bu kurs eng kamida ikki oy davom etadi! 🎖Kursga qatnashish uchun meni o’zimga yozasizlar (@Writing_adminn ): darajalaringizni isbotlovchi certificate yoke mock exam natijasini tashlaysiz. Agar isbot bo’lmasa meni o’zim Speaking imtihon qilib olaman online.

Xooooop, qachon boshlasak ekan bu offline kurschani?

IN 16 MINUTES! (under the supervision of my students)

With the evolution of social standards and improved living conditions, it has become increasingly common for parents, irrespective of their income levels, to purchase their children a multitude of playthings, particularly in developed nations. On the face of it the advantages seem most apparent, but could there be a downside to this devoted style of parenting as well? Proponents of this parenting strategy cite various reasons to support their stance. They contend that a diverse array of toys can stimulate a child’s creativity and imagination. As part of playtime, children engage with a wide range of materials and act out different roles, which can stretch the limits of their imagination. Another argument in favor of this parenting approach is that it encourages social development. Interacting with toys often requires engaging with peers, thereby cultivating essential interpersonal skills such as sharing, taking turns, and collaborating with others. In a world where children are preoccupied with sedentary activities such as online gaming, social media browsing, and binge-watching television programs, encouraging social interactions through toys takes on added significance. It it possible that owning a wide range of toys is any way detrimental to a child’s holistic growth? Even though this is an unusual question, there are some hidden pitfalls. For one, affluent families might spoil their son or doughter with a large number of toys, which can leave negative impacts on the child’s character development. When children grow up accustomed to having an unlimited number of toys, they tend to develop a materialistic attitude towards life, prioritizing material possessions over values like personal fulfillment and purpose. For another, a child’s concentration may suffer if he or she is surrounded by too many things to play with from a very young age. Rather than focusing on a single toy at a time and getting the best out of it, children with multiple playthings might experience feelings of boredom, fatigue, and distraction. Finally, the majority of toys are commonly made of plastic, which is not biodegradable. As demand for plastic toys increases, so does the level of waste, pollution, and environmental degradation. In conclusion, although showering children with a surplus of toys facilitates educational and interpersonal development, it is important to recognize the potential effects on their character development, focus, and environmental sustainability. It is only through strategic planning and thoughful decision-making that parents can raise children who are intellectually advanced, socially adept, physically healthy, and environmentally conscious. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

I’ll write a bit unusual essay on this topic, but at an 8.0+ level as usual! @WRITING_T
I’ll write a bit unusual essay on this topic, but at an 8.0+ level as usual! @WRITING_T

✅IELTS-7.0 🔥Full IELTS and Writing courses 💥As is always the case, I am grateful to help such industrious and competent stu
IELTS-7.0 🔥Full IELTS and Writing courses 💥As is always the case, I am grateful to help such industrious and competent students achieve their academic goals, even though my contribution is too small. @WRITING_T