Zafar Sobitov

PROMPT: Act as a certified IELTS examiner. Assess my Writing Task 2 essay according to the official IELTS band descriptors: Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource, and Grammatical Range & Accuracy. I want highly detailed, sentence-by-sentence feedback. For each sentence in my essay: 1. Quote the sentence. 2. Identify any grammar, vocabulary, or punctuation errors. 3. Explain why it is incorrect (in simple but precise terms). 4. Provide a corrected version. 5. Suggest a more advanced Band 8–9 version (if possible). After analyzing all sentences, provide: • Estimated band score for each criterion (Task Response, Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resource, Grammar) • Overall band score • Key strengths • Key weaknesses • Specific advice on how to reach Band 8–9 Be strict, objective, and examiner-like. Do not skip any sentence.

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❗️There is nothing better than = dan yaxshiroq narsa yo’q 💠There is nothing better than + verb ing 🌻There is nothing better than drinking coffee in the morning 🌻There is nothing better than having a picnic with your friends in your free time Siz uchun-chi? Bo’sh vaqtizda nima qilishdan yaxshiroq narsa yo’q commentda yozib keting

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🍂🍂🍂 0 dan Beginnerdan B2 gacha

Ustoz barcha bergan bilimlariz uchun kotta rahmat hudoyim keyingi ishlarizga rivoj bersin ishlarizni osson qilib qoysin

🍂🍂🍂 0 dan Beginnerdan B2 gacha

Hozir Multi level javobi kutayotganlaring ahvoli😁

Hayotimizda duch kelgan har bir insondan nimadir o’rganamiz: kimdir sizga odam tanlashni; kimdir sabrni; kimdir chegarangizni bilishni; yana kimdir qanday inson bo’lishingiz istamasligingizni ko’rsatadi.

⭐️⭐️Language for describing map⭐️⭐️ ⭐️Da joylashgan' A park is in the northwest of the tow A park stands in the northwest of the town A park is situated in the northwest of the town A park is sited in the northwest of the town A park is located in the northwest of the town ⭐️Obyeklarni qurish' A factory was built in the north A factory was constructed in the noth A factory sprang up in the north ⭐️Obyektlarni buzish' The old stadium was demolished The old stadium was knocked The old stadium was pulled down ⭐️Kesmoq daraxtlarni The trees were cut down The trees were chopped down The trees were cleared ⭐️Obyekt boshqa bir bino sifatda o'zgaritildi' The farm was replaced by a factory The farm gave way to a factory The factory made way for a factory ⭐️Kengaytirish' The car park was expanded The railway was extended

Problems with prepositions 🪷. *Enter University, ✅ Enter the room✅. to❌ Enter a building ✅ 🌸. *Join a group✅ Join a course✅to❌ Join a chat✅ 🩷. *Contact a manager✅ Contact administration✅with ❌ Contact us✅ 🪷. * Face a problem ✅ Face a difficult ✅ with❌ Face a situation ✅ 🌸. * go abroad✅ To❌ go overseas✅ 🪻. * study abroad✅ In❌ Work abroad