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Love never fails, and if it failed, it was not love

You are beautiful, even the stars reflect their light from the sparkle of your eyes.

I painted you like angels on the ceilings of churches and loved you sacredly.

The minutes when I contemplated your face were life.

★.

I spend the night waiting for that message that I did not reach.

I was stabbed with a sword, I made it.

My heart bleeds longing for someone who will not return.

You sound like music taking me away from my reality.