DILMUROD IELTS 8.0

3 structures that will be useful for writing task 1: 1. ….and/but this was followed by + (adjective) + noun. e.g. The number of people visiting Australia increased slightly, but this was followed by a sudden decline to 200 in 2019. 2. Before/After + adjective + noun/ GERUND, clause. e.g. After a considerable decrease to 10% in 1980, the figure for transport remained unchanged for the next two decades. - Before reaching its peak of 80 in the final year, the trend of energy saw multiple fluctuations throughout. - After increasing slightly to 12 million in 2005, the number of people visiting museums rose further to 15 million in 2007. 3. Despite + adjective+noun/ GERUND, main clause. e.g. Despite a dramatic drop in 2000, the share of money used for transport purposes recovered to its original point over five years. - Despite reaching a high of 30% in 2005, the figure for homelessness fell to lower than 20% in 2010.

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Benefits of getting up early (Ozimni experienceimdan) - you start having high productivity, as waking up early grants you more time to do things that you are procrastinating possibly - you start feeling a surge of energy and freshness in your blood🩸. This gives you more power to act daily without much fatigue. In other words, you will build up higher fatigue threshold. - you start recovering from stress and anxiety that normally accompany you throughout your work day. Making a brisk stroll the first thing in the early morning helps you achieve inner peace (as Kung Fu Panda 🐼) and puts your mind at ease.

Nowadays, most countries improve their living standards through economic development. However, some social values are lost as a result. What do you think are the advantages and the disadvantages of this phenomenon? In many parts of the world, currently economic growth is viewed by governments as a tool to enhance their citizens` living standards. However, some people are concerned that this can take a toll on societal values. Although raising life quality through better economic policies can offer numerous advantages, possible significant drawbacks should not be overlooked. The economic development is often associated with certain upsides. Improved economy facilitates greater access to high-quality education and healthcare services, leading to increased levels of well-being and literacy of the nation. Job opportunities will also multiply, making it relatively easy for citizens to find employment and earn a decent income. This in turn decreases unemployment and financial instability. For example, in countries like South Korea and Singapore, rapid economic growth has led to significant improvements in education, healthcare systems and career prospects, benefiting the overall population. Considering all these advantages, it seems logical to argue that enhancing the economy yields several benefits for the population. That said, these improvements are not without trade-offs, and may come at the expense of social values and traditions. One significant drawback is the erosion of cultural heritage. Modernization, driven by economic advancement, often diverts focus from traditional practices and customs, putting cultural richness, passed down through generations, at risk. In most Asian countries including China and Japan, where economy is booming, fewer and fewer people are celebrating some of their cultural festivals annually as they are adopting modern lifestyles. From a financial standpoint, the economic development can lead to a widening gap among society members. While it creates many job prospects and business opportunities, this may also exacerbate social inequality, with the rich becoming richer and the poor struggling to keep up. This disparity is evident in many developing nations where economic growth benefits a small elite, leaving the majority behind. In conclusion, while there are certain advantages to enhancing economy of a country, the disadvantages should not be neglected. I believe a balanced approach is key, where both the economic enhancement and social integration are fostered so that cultural values and traditions are regularly practiced while enjoying financial benefits. By doing so, countries can achieve sustainable development that benefits all aspects of society. #advantagesdisadvantages #essay #365words