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The infographics provide statistics on trade values between China and Australia from 1998 to 2004. In general, while both exports to and imports from China rose steadily, the latter was consistently greater. Notably, the only commodity not to have seen an increase was textiles, with telecommunication becoming the most imported to Australia by the end. Import-to-export ratio stood stable during the entire timeframe. In particular, in 1998, Australia imported goods valued at 20 billion dollars, twice as much as it exported to the trading partner. Going up at a pace of 10 billion dollars a year, import values had doubled (40 billion dollars) and those of export tripled (30 billion dollars) by 2004. Despite this, a gap of 10 billion dollars in favor of imports sustained in all the years. The breakdown of goods, meanwhile, revealed varying patterns. Over the period between 2003 and 2004, telecommunication and sports equipment witnessed the most pronounced growth of 5 billion dollars to 7 and 8 billion dollars, respectively, which placed them second and first on the list. Furniture and computers came next, two categories that, after a negligible rise, reached parity at 6 billion dollars in 2004. Clothing imports, remaining unaltered at 4 billion dollars, rounded out the list.#report
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The diagram outlines the steps whereby a water filter is assembled. This process is dual-phased, starting out with layering materials, as a result of which potable water can be extracted. For this to take place, several raw materials and special equipment are required. The initial stage involves the use of a cylindrical container, namely a drum. Once a certain amount of gravel, charcoal and sand are placed on top of each other to fill nearly half the drum, it is closed with a plastic lid and the filtration can be initiated. To this end, impure water is poured into the drum, permeating the layers that remove impurities—a procedure that results in drinkable water. Following this, the water flows through a pipe connected to the side outlet at the top of the drum into a barrel. There, water is stored for some period and, with the help of a tap attached to the bottom that can be used to control the flow of water, mugs or cups can be filled with the drinkable water.#report
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As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems. What are these problems for young people living in cities? What are possible solutions for these problems? There is a correlation between the growth of metropolitan cities and the problems they face. Indeed, this expansion affects the young immensely, resulting in not only hyper-competitive job market but also heightened crime rates. To counteract these, a more balanced distribution of resources should be established. With ever-growing large cities, the competition in the job market is bound to become stiff, especially for young workers. This is because they cannot compete with their more experienced and skilled counterparts, since in a market where job requirements are stringent, only experts can survive. Over time, this may lead to higher levels of unemployment and limit social mobility for the less experienced. Another by-product is the rise of crime. When left without a chance to carve out a lucrative career, unlike others who have more working expertise, young employees are more likely to turn to criminal means of making a livelihood. Such big cities as London and New York, among others, are pertinent examples, with both having a vast territory as well as alarming crime rates. These issues, however worrying they seem, can be ameliorated with government regulations. In fact, when the development of rural areas is as much prioritized as that of cities, the latter are less likely to grow at an unprecedented rate, as they do today in multiple countries. The number of businesses and factories, and even the infrastructure, would be more evenly distributed and developed, deterring disproportionate growth of urban centres. Compared to other countermeasures, from imposing limits on the population boom in cities to moving residents coercively to the countryside, these shifts are more inclusive of any vulnerable groups yet require a concerted effort by both the public and government. That is, these two parties should co-operate at national and grassroots levels by establishing two-way communication to ensure the divide between cities and rural places shrinks. In summary, city sprawl and the issues it entails may impact the lives of young people adversely, bringing about stiff competition in the labor market and exacerbating crime problems. Yet, minimising these problems would involve collaborative action taken by both communities and authorities to allocate resources evenly across urban and rural areas.#essay
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Repost from Jasur Juraev | IELTS 9.0
The picture provides a comparison between two plans. Overall, while both plans share a set of similarities, largely identical office equipment, the arrangement differs widely. In particular, Plan A has a more spacious and simpler layout, in contrast to Plan B, which offers a more compact yet functional arrangement. One key difference between the plans is the front section. Specifically, there is a presenter's chair, along with a computer and printer situated at the entrance. Also, all of these are next to a white board located near the entrance in Plan A, yet in Plan B, these are set in a more central location, parallel to each other. Unlike the former plan, where the morning tea area is at the rear section, the latter features this area on the right-hand side of the entrance. Another distinction is the seating arrangement. In Plan A, tables, while occupying the centre of the room, form a U-shaped layout and a total of 10 chairs are positioned around the sides. In comparison, in Plan B, the tables are placed farther from the center and organized in clusters, two of which have a set of 3 chairs on both sides. Thus, this allows the room to accommodate more seats.➡️Score: 8/9/8/8 🔥 #new_tape_task1
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Repost from Dilshodbek Ravshanov (9.0)
Assalamu alaikum, everybody. I hope you are all doing well.
This is not a post about IELTS. Those of you who have been following my channel for a long time know that I am usually very careful about what I post here. This time around, it is a charity post, and it concerns the niece of one of my former colleagues.
I was recently informed that she (her name is Muslima) has been diagnosed with cancer at a very young age. It is a tragic situation, but there is still hope because treatment is possible. Unfortunately, the treatment is very expensive, and her family is currently trying to collect the necessary funds from different sources.
I would also like to help, and that is why I am sharing this message here. To make sure everything is transparent and credible, I have attached pictures and documentation showing that this is a real case.
The family has already traveled to Turkey because they are planning to continue the treatment there. They have also provided documentation related to the diagnosis and medical payments to confirm the situation.
Of course, any donation can help — even a single dollar. When many people contribute together, it can truly make a difference and help save this young girl’s life. Any support is greatly appreciated. Thank you for your attention, and thank you regardless of whether you decide to donate or not.
Cards for donations:
5614 6822 1285 2836 UZS - Yorqinoy Ikromova
4278 3200 2871 8723 USD - Yorqinoy Ikromova
Have a good day.
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The table present a comparison of men and women in terms of employment statistics for six economic sectors in two years: 1993 and 2003. Over this decade, in most industries, there was an upward trajectory of various patterns recorded for both genders, with IT and service emerging as the major employers for both genders. Of all the sectors studied, IT and farming were the ones where the gender gap was the most pronounced, yet it was not the case for commerce and manufacturing.
Looking at the widest gender differences, in the IT industry, a whopping 80% of the total workforce was made up of men—4 times as many as women. By 2003, however, this gap narrowed notably, with 70% of IT specialists being men in comparison to women at a mere 30%. A similar male-to-female ratio was seen in farming: in the former year, men accounted for three-fourth, which was three time the figure for their female counterparts; a decade later, men a saw a slight drop of 10% to 65%, and women witnessed a rise of the same margin to 35%, marking a less pronounced gender gap.
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Some birds are saying if you hit this link and drop a couple of votes, you’ll get video lessons….
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🚨 2-month plan to jump by 1.5-2.0 points!
✔️ Detailed explanation
✔️ Realistic study schedule
✔️ For users from Intermediate to Advanced
P.S. Save, stick to and then leave your comments on the effectiveness.
#writing
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Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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Repost from Jasur Juraev | IELTS 9.0
🚨 Please, read this first and only then contact me
#writing_marathon_1
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Unlike these tourists, those from Japan and Korea showed no clear patterns. In particular, air transport was the most used by Japanese travellers, at over a whopping 50%, compared to Korean travellers at around 42% (matching the figure for their German and British counterparts). Coaches ranked second for the Japanese (at just below 50%) and third for the Korean (at well below 40%). By contrast, Korean tourists relied on cars to travel in Zealand much more than those from Japan: the former's proportion stood at a high of nearly 48%, twice as high as that of the latter. Finally, ferries were consistently much less preferred, with less than one in ten tourists from both groups travelling by this means.
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⚡️ Vocab note. Take notes and if you write a body using these, I might check your work in the comment section!
#vocab
#task1
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Repost from Jasur Juraev | IELTS 9.0
The announcement will be posted on January 22. Till then, you are free to ask any question about it
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Repost from Jasur Juraev | IELTS 9.0
The course will be very simple and highly productive:
➖Teachers: Me (W-8.5), Dilshod (T2 - 9/9/9/9), Mirxaydar (T2 - 9/9/9/8)
➖Duration: 30 days
➖Lessons: daily
➖Language: English (B2-C1)
How to join ?
• wait for the announcement of the course
• prove your english is at least B2
• possess a decent level of emotional regulation
• be free for 3-5 hours every day
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☄️ Difficulty: hard
☄️ Score: 8.0+
✔️ Structures and chunks to learn ? - Yes
✔️ Examples in use ? - Yes
✔️ Overview, Body explanation ? - Yes
🚩 By the end of this month, I'll announce the start of an INTENSIVE WRITING COURSE, where you will find about 20 of such files.
#task1
#vocab
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The illustration outlines how aluminum cans are recycled in a facility. This process starts out with initial cleaning, after which the cans proceed to a series of refining procedures to be re-formed for consumer use afterwards. Notably, while most steps are fully machinery-based, several of them are heavily reliant on human labor.#task1
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Statistics for British, German and Australian travellers showed that, in comparison to other means, coaches were far more widely used, with the figures at a whopping 58%, 55% and exactly 50%, respectively. Air transport came next, which roughly 42% of the British and Germans visiting the country opted for, as did a mere 25% of Australians. Third on the list, cars were even less commonly used, and the proportions stood at 35% for Germans, nearly 29% for the British, and a low of 20% for Australians. Ferry use, however, was the least significant, as the percentages did not surpass the 20-percent mark.🚨 G/A 9.0 - uses a wide range of structures with full flexibility and control #grammar #task1
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The chart compares the percentages of tourists using different transport means in New Zealand, in the year 2004. In general, while preferences for transport means were similar among British, German and Australian tourists, it was not the case for Japanese and Korean travellers. For the former group, travelling by coach was the most common, with ferries being the least popular choice across all the groups.➡️ It was not the case for - It does not apply to/It's not true for ➡️ For the former group - Regarding tourists from Britain, Germany, and Australia 🚨 The difference is in 'sophisticated controle of lexis' (L/R - 9.0) #vocab #task1
