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#task1 #writing   The line graph shows how many people participated in five different activities at a particular social center located in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020. In general, activities such as musical performances, table tennis, and a film club grew more popular among the participants towards the end of the period, with the last one attracting the highest number of people, while engaging in amateur dramatics fell out of favor. Despite consistent fluctuations, the number of martial arts participants remained unchanged overall. It is also clear that the figure for table tennis witnessed the most pronounced change among all types of activities.   Focusing on the increases first, there were just over 60 members of the film club at the social center in 2000, a figure that then dipped to exactly 60 people over the ensuing ten years but then recovered to almost 70 club members at the end of the period, remaining the most appealing activity in the chart. The number of table tennis players stood at about 15 participants in the first year, which then saw a slight increase to 20 in 2010. From 2010 onwards, this figure experienced a dramatic growth and reached around 55 participants in 2020, thereby narrowing the gap with the film club. Musical performances, the least popular activity in the first half of the period, had no participants between 2000 and 2005. This figure, however, rose significantly to almost 20 by the end of the period.   The remaining two activities—amateur dramatics and martial arts—exhibited different trends. The former started at around 25 participants in 2000 and increased to almost 30 in the next five years before dropping noticeably to around a mere 5 participants in 2020. In 2000, the figure for those who did martial arts was below 40, which fluctuated over the study period and reverted to its initial figure in 2020.  WORD COUNT: 310 @kamalkhujaev

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