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Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev 3-yillik tajribaga IELTS INSTRUCTOR ,,Suhrob Academy" (online school) asoschisi 2000 dan ziyod shogirdlar chiqargan @WRITING_T (main channel) @suhrobacademy

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Assalomu alaykum, dustlar, bilasizlar men Samarqanddagi offline darslarni to’xtatganidim. Nima deysizlar meni IELTS dan 8.0 olgan o’quvchilarimdan bitta eng tajribalisi (mendan ancha yaxshi dars o’tadigani) offline darslarni o’tsinmi? He has been teaching IELTS for as long as 3 years.

A band 9.0 essay is on the way!
A band 9.0 essay is on the way!

📝NEW YORK TIMES! 1️⃣Hold back = restrict or prevent 2️⃣Bounce back = recover from 3️⃣Dampen = impede or hamper 4️⃣Travel suf
📝NEW YORK TIMES! 1️⃣Hold back = restrict or prevent 2️⃣Bounce back = recover from 3️⃣Dampen = impede or hamper 4️⃣Travel suffers = gets affected 🥇My laziness is holding me back from overcoming life’s challenges and accomplishing my goals. 🥈Resilient individuals do not find it difficult to bounce back from setbacks or failures. 🥉When international students face language barriers, they find it challenging to engage with their peers and complete assignments, which can ultimately dampen their confidence and self-esteem. 🏅As employees feel demotivated to work hard and perform at their best, productivity suffers. @WRITING_T

📊ESSAY ASSESSMENT! 🥇Task achievement-9.0 🥈Coherence and cohesion-8.0 🥉Lexical Resource-9.0 🏅Grammar range and accuracy-8.0 @WRITING_T

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With the proliferation of international exchange programs, it has become increasingly common for school graduates to explore higher education abroad. Despite the practical and emotional challenges of foreign education, I believe that its academic, personal, and professional benefits are much more significant. Initially, foreign experience can propel students down a perilious path of pragmatic and sentimental obstacles. From a pragmatic perspective, overseas students usually face language barriers when it comes to communicating with their tutors, participating in classroom discussions, and completing assignments, which makes it increasingly challenging to keep pace with native speakers. Additionally, the exorbitant cost of tution fees, accommodation, travel expenses, and daily necessities adds up quickly, leading to a hefty financial burden. Once their budgets are strained, students may resort to working part-time to supplement their income, which can interfere with their academic pursuits and social life. On the sentimental front, many foreign students struggle with negative feelings of homesickness, isolation, and loneliness, especially when they find it difficult to make friends and form meaningful relationships with locals. Although international students are expected to feel excited and enthusiastic about their educational journeys, in reality, their optimistic attitudes pale in comparison with nostalgia for their familiar surroundings and loved ones. The emotional struggles of overseas students extend beyond homesickness to culture shock as they struggle to navigate their new surroundings, including unfamiliar local practices, attitudes, social norms, along with different living standards, weather conditions, and food options. In spite of these practical and emotional challenges, which are probably solvable, the multifaceted benefits of pursuing higher education in a foreign country vastly outweigh any negative repercussions. Firstly, internationally renowned universities provide access to a wide range of educational resources such as state-of-the-art facilities, well-equipped laboratories, cutting-edge technologies, and competent professors, all of which serve to ensure high-standard educational standards. Secondly, studying abroad serves as a catalyst for personal growth since students are compelled to solve problems, manage finances, cope with stress, and navigate unfamiliar academic and social settings independently. The greater challenges they grapple with, the stronger sense of independence, self-reliance, and resilience they can develop. Lastly, overseas education opens doors to a broader spectrum of professional opportunities. International academic qualifications combined with greater intercultural competence and language proficiency offer foreign students a competitive edge in the global job market, leading to enhanced job prospects and financial stability. In conclusion, the long-term academic, personal, and professional advantages of overseas studies far outweigh any short-term practical and emotional difficulties. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In today's interconnected world, it has become increasingly common for individuals to travel abroad, particularly for education and employment purposes. However, I subscribe to the idea that living in a foreign country can lead to a slippery slope of social and practical challenges. From a societal perspective, when individuals encounter language barriers, they find it difficult to engage with locals and fellow expatriates, making it increasingly challenging to make friends and form meaningful relationships. This hardship results in negative feelings of isolation, loneliness, and homesickness, as well as discrimination and prejudice. Take international students, who face exclusion from peer groups and experience unequal treatment in academic settings, such as receiving lower grades and derogatory comments due to their limited language proficiency. From a pragmatic point of view, language difficulties can pose serious obstacles in terms of navigating legal procedures, such as visa applications, immigration processes, and compliance with local regulations. Even using public transportation, accessing healthcare services, grocery shopping, and ordering food in restaurants all everyday activities can prove practically difficult. Adding insult to injury, poor language skills can disenfranchise immigrants from securing employment opportunities, negatively affecting their job prospects and financial stability. In conclusion, I believe that living in a country where one has to speak a foreign language presents a host of social and practical difficulties. Therefore, it is essential for expatriates to seek out language courses, tutoring, and language exchange programs to overcome these challenges and make a smooth transition into their new home environment. Subrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

ESSAY ASSESSMENT! 🥇Task achievement-9.0 🥈Coherence and cohesion-9.0 🥉Grammar range and accuracy-8.0 🏅Lexical resource-9.0 @WRITING_T

Bugun 17 soatdan keyin birinchi darsni o’tamiz o’zi: men dars uchun tayyorlanishni boshladim😄🙃😉!

Men bu kursni demo darsini o’tib berolmadim: shuning uchun kursdan ikkilanayotganlar 20- va 21-Yanvar kuni o’tiladigan birinchi darslarga bepul qo’shilib ko’rsalaringiz bo’ladi. Adminga yozsalaringiz qo’shib qo’yadi kurs guruhiga: keyin birinchi darslar maqul kelsa kursga to’lov qilib qolasizlar!

A BAND 99999999999 ESSAY! With the influence of environmental calamities and human activities, many species of animals have dwindled and fallen on the edge of extinction. Given the role of human intervention in accelerating the rate at which animals die out, it is unreasonable to assert that animal extinction is nothing more than a natural process. This essay discusses the reasons why it is crucial for humans to prevent the extinction of animal species and the potential repercussions of failing to do so. A school of thought argues that animal species become extinct solely because of natural disasters, including earthquakes, hurricanes, and floods, as was the case with the disappearance of dinosaurs. Plausible as this reasoning seems, it is deeply flawed since it is anthropogenic activities like urbanization and industrialization that give rise to these environmental calamities in the modern world. A good case in point is climate change, an environmental issue primarily caused by the excessive release of greenhouse gas emissions from industrial facilities and vehicles. Many rare species of animals like polar bears would not have been in decline had we taken action to reduce our carbon footprints and reverse the effects of global warming. Furthermore, there are various human-driven factors that directly contribute to species endangerment and extinction. Take deforestation, for example. In many parts of the world, particularly in so-called advanced countries, forests have been cleared to make room for infrastructural and agricultural expansion. Although this course of action has made it possible to meet our needs for housing and food consumption, it has also fueled habitat degradation, leaving multiple species of animals and birds struggling to survive. Equally deleterious is over-hunting. Take feral goats, wild horses, foxes, and rabbits, all of which fall victim to illegal hunting for recreation in my home country of Uzbekistan. Last but not least, animal species play a significant role in maintaining the balance of eco-systems and supporting the well-being of human beings. The interconnectedness of all living beings means that the disappearance of one species can wreak havoc on the entire eco-system. For example, the extinction of a predator leads to the overabundance of its prey, disrupting the food chain and leading to further imbalances. In addition, many animal species provide direct benefits to humans in the form of medicinal resources, food sources, and ecological services. If all species of animals went extinct, we would struggle to find healthy food options for our sustenance and reliable treatments for our survival. In conclusion, the prevention of animal extinction is a responsibility we should not abdicate. The current impact of anthropogenic factors on the extinction crisis, the interconnectedness of all species, and the importance of animals for human well-being all provide compelling reasons to prioritize wildlife conservation. Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev @WRITING_T

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👍👍👍👍 Full KURS haqida 1000000% ma’lumot!

The meaning of life is to give life meaning✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨

2 soatda boshlaymiz tanishtiruv darsini: full IELTS kurs haqidagi qolib ketgan savollaringizni tayyorlab turingizlar!

🔥TODAY AT 19:30🔥

Ertadan keyin soat 19:30 da full IELTS kursni birinchi darsini o’tib beraman. Writing, Speaking, Reading, Listening har biridan qanday tayyorlanishni Vocab va Grammarni qanday oshirishni ham bonus sifatida ko’rasizlar!