Daily writing

Later I will share my summary on it

#article Source: @Ielts_zone

Why I chose among the not-even-worth-a-penny writing websites on the Internet is because when I personally write an essay and decide to read model essay on the topic, the first website that pops up is always this trash site.

Never ever pay a visit to Writing9.com whether it be finding writing tips or essay samples. Model essays ,in particular, are evaluated unreliably; there are even some essays given band 9 but not deserved such a score especially in terms of TR and CC. @dailywriting1

For the upcoming days, I will be sharing my own approach on how to practice writing essays step by step

#sample This is the essay which I wrote with my writing students today. These days more father's stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? The traditional view that men are breadwinners in the family and women are responsible for raising children and daily domestic chores is no longer in the trend, and parents are increasingly swaping their parental roles. In my opinion,  there could be two primary reasons behind this trend and it could be considered a very positive trend.     Recent social changes and increasing cost of living could be the driving forces behind exchanging domestic roles between parents. Firstly, equal rights movement had a profound impact on strenghening the role of women in society and presented the same job opputunities as men. For example, in many fields such as teaching, fashion design and telemarketing, female employees are outperforming their male counterparts. Secondly, because of people's insatiable demand for better lifestlyle, recent decades have experienced a substantial growth in living expenses, thereby prompting many women to leave their home, acquire a degree and get a job in their desired fields. In fact, females workers are currently being paid the same or higher amout of salary than males, and this enables couples to decide thier household roles according to mutual consent.    It seems to me that this development is very positive and should be seen as a progress. In terms of a benefit to women, they no longer shoulder the responsibilty of taking care of chores around house and instead they obtain education and step into a variety of different areas ranging from science to army. However, in the past, they were devoid of these privileges, leaving millions of potential gifted and talented women unnoticed. In regards with an advantage to men, they can stay at home, looking after their children or even honing their various skills such as picking up a new language or developing computer literacy if this is the thing they wish to do.  In conclusion, social reforms and soaring prices of living could be driving  this development, and I believe that this can have benefits to both genders. @dailywriting1 @dailywriting1 @dailywriting1

I guess I am back having left the channel abondoned for about 5 months. Later I'll share my essay and try to share smth new on a daily basis.

IELTS writing task 2: extend, develop, progress... You'll see these three words in the band descriptors for writing task 2. If you want a high score, you need to extend and develop your ideas, and your writing should progress from one sentence to the next. How do you achieve this? My tip is to make sure that each sentence says something new. The new information could be a reason, an example, a consequence, an alternative, a prediction... It's easy to make the mistake of repeating the same idea in slightly different ways. Don't do this. Don't feel that you need to rephrase a point that you've already made. Instead, make your point and then extend or develop it Source: ielts-simon.com @dailywriting1

Another approach for practising writing Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than rural areas. Why do you think is that? What can be done to reduce the crime rate? It is no doubt true that cities in many parts of the globe have higher number of crimes compared to urban areas. I can see two clear reasons and solutions to this problem.   There are two primary reasons why residents of urban areas suffer from high frequency of crime. Firstly, there is an inequality in the amount of income of urban inhabitants. This, in turn, is leading to greater disparities in wealth of population, making more people compete for less resources and services. As a consequence, this gap results in an increasing number of people in cities stepping into the crime world. Secondly, higher rates of unemployment is spurring growth in the number of crimes committed in urban areas. A lack of work, particularly for young people, often translates directly to crime. For example, Latin America has high unemployment rates, which is helping the region to keep as the most violent area status in the world. If you consider yourself too work-shy student and have a reluctance to write a full essay at one sitting, practice writing by dividing into parts as given above: write an introduction and a body 1 in the first day and the rest in the second. You don't necessarily have to be under exam condition. The objective should be to learn something new every time not assess your writing level.